Ok. I'm gonna post my review in Cat and in English.
The mastering is done really well. While not being too hardcore for a Glitch Hop song, you did very well on this. Be sure to let Said know this too. You guys did really good.
(Meow, meow meow meow. Meow meow meow meow, meow meow. Meow meow Said meow meow. Meow meow.
The cat translation was really good! You sound like a native speaker!
FL Studio 12 takes time to adjust, trust me.
This is your best song yet by FAR! Good job!
But, as always...
Mastering is a bit better, but it needs to be as loud as possible without exceeding 0 db. You're on the right track.
Song structure is a bit better, but it sounds empty. You need more sound design.
If you added an outro similar to the intro, the loop would play smoother.
That's actually all I have to say this time.
You did better this time, and I'm proud of you.
Thanks, daddy ;0
This sounds very out of tune in some places.
The song structure needs a TON of work.
The transitions are too rough.
Perhaps this would suit a video game if nothing was going on, and everything is calm, but you still need to make it sound interesting.
Most people would pity you for this being your first song, but I won't because I wanna help you get better, and do whatever it takes to do so.
You really have to master your music, and you know that.
You're really good and you must understand your DAW really well, but at the end of the day, if it doesn't sound good, it isn't.
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